I’m catching up on reviews; I read this some time last month. This is a bit unfortunate, because I enjoyed it while I read it, and if I’d reviewed it immediately afterward, I would have been more positive. One month later, I’m finding it un-memorable, which is not what I want from a Vorkosigan book.

In other ways, too, it wasn’t what I wanted. I always liked Ivan as a character, and what I probably would have liked best would be something with a tone along the lines of the early Miles books – funny with serious undertones, or serious with lots of funny moments – like The Warrior’s Apprentice or The Vor Game. I would have loved to see Bujold take Ivan a little more seriously, and have him wrestle with taking himself a little more seriously. Alternately, I would have enjoyed a pure light-hearted romp like Cetaganda or Ethan of Athos.

Captain Vorpatril’s Alliance had a few good serious moments, and it had some excellent light-hearted romping. But it was embedded in a lot of low-conflict, low-stakes, low-emotion, low-intensity scenes hanging around Barrayar. I found this especially frustrating because I kept seeing how a scene or plot point could have played out in a more interesting way, and then it often didn’t.

I did enjoy reading this, so the review is more grumpy than my actual experience of the book. The first quarter or so, on Komarr, was pretty great. Especially the scene with the groats. I also loved the offering to the dead, and the conversation where Tej and Rish talk over their problems and keep coming to the conclusion that they could probably be solved by someone having sex with Byerly.

My issues with this book come down to why I love Bujold’s earlier books. They tend to have very intense feelings and high stakes, whether emotional or physical. This book had low-key emotions and low stakes. It had some good comic scenes, but was too slow-paced to work as pure comedy.

The issue of stakes also applies to comedy, as a lot of comedy only works if the characters are extremely, extremely worried that something will go wrong, and are putting tons of effort into ensuring that it won’t, or trying to fix it if it does. A lot of this book would have been funnier if the characters had been more frantic.

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Captain Vorpatril's Alliance (Vorkosigan Saga)
This is purely for study purposes (mine) and entertainment (yours and mine). I cannot actually diagnose any real person.

Young Miles

Presenting Problem: Miles Vorkosigan is a 29-year-old white male who appears older than his reported age. He is of below-average height and weight, and has visible disabilities affecting his legs and back. He wore a military uniform, and his grooming and hygiene were above average (normal for Barrayaran military.) His speech and movements were very energetic, and he appeared restless and fidgety. Upon initial questioning, he appeared cooperative but irritated.

The client relaxed when he was assured that the contents of the meeting were not only confidential but top secret, and was quoted back (by advance permission) Imperial Security Chief Simon Illyan’s comment, “I don’t want to fix him. I just want to know what makes him tick.”

The client then confirmed that he was present due to an experimental pilot program bringing in Betan therapists to assess and, if necessary, treat members of Barrayaran Imperial Security. He rapidly diagnosed himself as “a bit bipolar, hyperactive, split personality, and megalomania,” then laughed when it was pointed out that the last two are not diagnoses.

Client stated that he has a history of depressive episodes and combat-related flashbacks, but neither interferes with his job performance. He stated that he has satisfying relationships with his family, is happy with his work, and has ongoing romantic relationships. Upon closer questioning, he admitted to a suicide attempt as a teenager and frustration over being unmarried. Client denies current suicidal ideation.

Personal History: Serious physical disabilities. Social prejudice due to ableism. Satisfying and very successful military career. High-stress life, but client stated that he enjoys this. Client seems very invested in his secret identity.

Family Background: Good relationship with parents and extended family. History of conflict with deceased grandfather. Recently learned of existence of clone-brother, but clone-brother cut off contact, to client’s regret.

Psychiatric/Treatment History: No previous diagnoses. Client said that he has never been treated for a mental illness, and speculated that he is probably allergic to all psychiatric medications.

Differential Diagnosis: Described manic and hypomanic states to client, and asked if he was having one now. Client stated that he is “always like this” except when he is having a depressive episode. Acquired client’s permission to call his mother, who agreed that client’s baseline met all the clinical criteria for hypomania, except for the existence of a non-hypomanic baseline. Client’s mother described client’s behavior as a child, which met the criteria for Attention-Deficit/Hyperactivity Disorder, Predominately Hyperactive/Impulsive Type. Client and client’s mother stated that the client has never had a manic episode except while under the influence of a substance.

Symptoms of PTSD are concentrated on the reexperiencing and increased arousal axes. Avoidance symptoms are missing, but reexperiencing ones (dreams, flashbacks, psychological distress, and physiological reactivity) are sufficiently intense as to justify the diagnosis.

Rule out Dissociative Identity Disorder. Client’s over-investment in his secret identity is common in military operatives, and there is no amnesia present.

Rule out Narcissistic Personality Disorder. Client’s grandiosity and sense of specialness don’t seem unrealistically inflated given his circumstances, and he shows no more entitlement and arrogance than is common among wealthy, high-status people. Other symptoms are not present.

Recommendations: 1. Individual therapy services to address his PTSD and Major Depressive Disorder. Recommend a cognitive-behavioral approach.

2. A complete medical examination to rule out possible physiological or medication-based causes for his conditions.

3. A medication consultation. NOTE: See extensive list of allergies. Be aware that while the therapist did not diagnose Bipolar II, it could be present in a non-diagnosable form.

4. Individual therapy services from a Jungian perspective to address issues of Persona and Self.

Axis I (clinical disorders): Major Depressive Disorder, Recurrent, With Catatonic Features. Posttraumatic Stress Disorder.Attention-Deficit/Hyperactivity Disorder, Predominately Hyperactive/Impulsive Type.

Axis II (personality disorders and mental retardation): : No diagnosis.

Axis III (general medical conditions): : See attached files.

Axis IV (psychosocial and environmental problems): : High-pressure occupation. Ongoing search for wife.

Axis V (GAF: Global Assessment of Functioning): : 65 (Some distressing symptoms, but generally functioning well.)

Rachel's note: What do you think? Do you need the existence of a non-hypomanic baseline to diagnose Bipolar II? Or should I have gone ahead and diagnosed it anyway? (Or guessed that brief non-hypomanic, non-depressive periods probably existed but had gone unnoticed?)
Adrian likes anime, but had not yet read any manga-- until I gave him volume 1 of Monster. After the obligatory few pages of disorientation via unfamiliar reading orientation, he was completely sucked into the clever plotting and generally correct medical details (though he is still trying to figure out what medical instrument was translated as "spatula.") I have promised to loan him the rest of the series (as far as I have it, anyway.)

He also loved His Majesty's Dragon -- another gift from me.

I just packed him off to the airport for a week-long trip to Denver, along with my final gift, Young Miles, which constitutes The Warrior's Apprentice, The Vor Game, and "The Mountains of Mourning." When I described it to him, he said that he thinks his best buddy Jarrad, who was an Air Force medic with him, had recced it to him before. My mention of "Camp Permafrost" rang a bell, as apparently that was Jarrad's nickname for some godforsaken base in North Dakota.
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