How supremely disappointing--there are overalls and a checked shirt and poultry puns on the damn cover!
But everything changes when Peach, a gorgeous woman full of confidence and sunshine struts into her life and builds her nest right next to her
This makes my copyeditor eyes twitch. Needs comma after the parenthetical ends--after sunshine. So now they've guaranteed twice I will not buy the book!
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But everything changes when Peach, a gorgeous woman full of confidence and sunshine struts into her life and builds her nest right next to her
This makes my copyeditor eyes twitch. Needs comma after the parenthetical ends--after sunshine. So now they've guaranteed twice I will not buy the book!