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rachelmanija ([personal profile] rachelmanija) wrote2022-06-16 11:56 am
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So THAT'S what was going on!

There's a funny bit in Biggles Fails To Return in which Ginger, impersonating a Spanish onion-seller in Monaco, shares some bread and an onion with a local. The local nearly spits out the onion, appalled at its sharpness, and asks Ginger where the heck they came from. Ginger is forced to quickly come up with an explanation of why he has English onions rather than the presumably sweeter Spanish ones.

I've been reading books for more than forty years, and this is the first time I realized that when characters take nothing but a loaf of bread and a raw onion as journey provisions, or eat bread and a raw onion for lunch, they're eating something like a sweet Vidalia onion, not the onions that make your eyes water and would be torture to eat whole and raw. I did vaguely wonder why they were always eating raw onions rather than, say, a raw turnip that at least wouldn't be actively painful to eat, but I supposed, without really pausing to interrogate it, that people in times past were so horrendously deprived that eating a raw onion for lunch barely registered!

This made me think about other bits in books that make more sense with context, whether that context is new information, other books, or just more life experience.

In The Once and Future King, the boy Wart, who will become King Arthur, is going on and on about the glory of fighting. Merlyn argues with him, then "seems to change the subject" and asks Wart which he had liked better, the ants or the wild geese. The chapter ends there. When I read the book as a child, I took that literally: Merlyn was frustrated with the Wart and changed the subject.

When I re-read the book as an adult, I realized that the geese were peaceful and didn't believe in national boundaries, and the ants were totalitarian and had the motto "Everything not forbidden is compulsory." Merlyn wasn't changing the subject, he was winning the argument... but the Wart, like me, missed the point.

More recently, I listened to Watership Down on audio, read by Peter Capaldi. I had mixed feelings about his performance, but while listening I suddenly understood something that I never had before, and I must have read that book twenty times.

In the warren of the shining wires, Silverweed recites a poem. It's quite beautiful and initially seems fantastical, with a rabbit asking to accompany the stream and become rabbit-of-the-water, accompany the falling leaves and become rabbit-of-the-earth, accompany the wind and become rabbit-of-the-wind. Finally, he openly asks to join Frith and die. Fiver is horrified at the poem (the others don't understand it) and says it's taking something true (all rabbits must die) and making it into something twisted and perverse (making the pursuit of death seem beautiful).

I always wondered about that poem. The final verse is straightforwardly what Fiver says the whole poem is about, but the earlier verses aren't clearly about death - they seem much more in the vein of other rabbit legends where magical things happen. I had puzzled over it, and finally decided that they're in the real world, so asking to be a magical being like a rabbit of the water or a rabbit of the earth was asking to go to the magical realm after death. But that never felt quite satisfactory to me.

Then, listening to Capaldi read the poem, I suddenly understood. Silverweed is talking very poetically about something that isn't a fantasy or metaphor at all. When he says he wants to go down with the leaves and be rabbit of the earth, he means that he wants to die and have his body decay and literally become part of the earth, and eventually, as it breaks down more and more, the water and the air. No wonder Fiver was horrified!

Have you ever understood things in books long after you first read them?
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[personal profile] mildred_of_midgard 2022-06-21 06:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Also. It occurs to me I picked Savoy because, of the options available in the 17th-18th centuries, its starting conditions were most similar to Gondor's. (As recessional notes, there are still significant differences). If your fantasy country has different starting conditions, feel free to describe them to me and I will see if I can find a country that's a closer match and rec sources on centralization in that country. Options include: Prussia, France, Spain, Austria, Russia, Sweden that I can talk about off the top of my head and rec sources on.
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[personal profile] telophase 2022-06-22 08:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! Shall we take this to DMs or email so I don't blather on AT LENGTH in [personal profile] rachelmanija's comments? :D
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[personal profile] mildred_of_midgard 2022-06-22 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
I have just the place for you! Several of us have been blathering on AT LENGTH about history in [personal profile] cahn's comments for the last 3 years, mostly about the 18th century but also about whatever period strikes our interest. We call it salon.

Visiting our salon will be even better than DMing me or emailing me, because [personal profile] selenak knows a lot about history that I don't, and then you can have both of us helping you, and maybe other people too.

I think Selena's traveling internationally right now, so she may not be immediately available, but we definitely plot fiction in salon, so I know she'll pitch in when she's free again.

The currently active salon post is here (the old posts are in the tag). Feel free to pop right in and reply with a description of your fantasy situation and what you're looking for.

Welcome!
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[personal profile] telophase 2022-06-23 08:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I'll drop by as soon as I get a chance. :)
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[personal profile] mildred_of_midgard 2022-06-23 03:57 am (UTC)(link)
Oh! And if you prefer to keep the details of your work in progress private, just drop a line to that effect and ask Cahn to create a tagged post locked to just the four of us: you, me, her, and Selena. We've done that before when one of us was plotting fiction that needed to not be publicly searchable (say, findable by the recipient).
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[personal profile] cahn 2022-06-23 06:04 am (UTC)(link)
Come over and hang out with us! :D (The posts are tagged "Frederick the Great" because that's where we started, and still keep coming back to him, but range all over the place.) No pressure, but if you would like to come, welcome! Talking AT LENGTH is encouraged!

Also, just so you know, salon came about in large part because I know basically ZERO history, and [personal profile] mildred_of_midgard and [personal profile] selenak have, for almost three (!) years now, not stopped having a good time telling me about history and answering all my many extremely-amateur questions -- they are super <3 :D
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[personal profile] telophase 2022-06-23 08:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'll drop by as soon as I get a chance!