Man, that ending would have been weird even if he'd had a severe heart condition or something. A tooth infection, though???
I mean, yeah, dental stuff could suck a lot in post-apocalyptic conditions, but what a weird anticlimax for a book. Especially when it sounds like it would have had a very good ending if the last couple of pages had just been cut.
ETA: Any chance the weird stuff on the last two pages was meant to set up suspense/drama for a sequel?
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I mean, yeah, dental stuff could suck a lot in post-apocalyptic conditions, but what a weird anticlimax for a book. Especially when it sounds like it would have had a very good ending if the last couple of pages had just been cut.
ETA: Any chance the weird stuff on the last two pages was meant to set up suspense/drama for a sequel?