I've been reading Gerald Durrell since I was in my twenties, and I loved your story. The voice is dead right, especially Gerry himself and Theodore. The last paragraph does that Durrell thing of going from all bright and cheerful and funny to really very serious and important, without any fuss.
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Date: 2018-01-02 02:49 am (UTC)P.