Erk, yes. When your heroine's actions in the third act consist of sitting in a courtroom, your structure has issues! I liked Sydney a lot, though. She was a refreshingly mature heroine.
Try Gaffney's Outlaw in Paradise. It has problems, too, but it's hysterical.
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Date: 2009-10-14 07:30 pm (UTC)Try Gaffney's Outlaw in Paradise. It has problems, too, but it's hysterical.