My apologies for the incredibly late review. Perhaps starting a monthly book club and graduate school at the same time was a trifle over-ambitious. If you too are pressed for time, here’s my short review: Damn, that was a good book. Go get it!

Everyone knows about the Witches’ Carnival: the group of near-immortal hedonists who travel from town to town across the world, throwing the wildest party anyone’s ever attended, if you’re lucky enough to hear about it and cool enough to get in, and then vanishing without a trace. And if you’re really lucky, smart, cool, wild, and brave, maybe they’ll take you with them.

Alabama high school girls Gilly and Sam have been best friends since Sam rescued Gilly from homophobic bullying. Gilly longs to be beautiful and cool, and does her best by putting on an aggressive punk front. She’s not-so-secretly in love with Sam, which is hard to get over given that Sam, who identifies as straight, does sometimes have sex with her. It’s an unusually realistic depiction of how confusing and fluid sexuality, sexual orientation, and identity can be. After Sam gets in a horrendous fight with her family, she convinces Gilly to come with her to seek out the Witches’ Carnival. Gilly steals $50,000 of her crooked cop father’s dirty money, and they hit the road.

The novel reminded me a little bit of earlyish books by Charles de Lint and a lot of earlyish books by Francesca Lia Block, but less cute and more gritty. Some of the grittiness is laid on heavily, but it’s also genuinely edgy: not only is there explicit teen lesbian sex (much of it very satisfyingly hot), but the girls’ dialogue is politically incorrect in the extreme, and there is a detailed (and quite interesting) explanation of how to create a fake US passport. Not to mention an enormous amount of drug-taking. In fact, while there is one disquieting bad trip, the novel sometimes read like the author had made a product placement deal with the Mescaline Producers of America.

Sam and Gilly – Gilly, especially – are believable, vivid characters, and their bond gives the book its emotional force. The prose is distinctive and sometimes quite beautiful. Halfway between a picaresque road trip novel and a more tightly plotted fantasy, nearly every character and incident has its own thematic or plot-related part to play in the whole. While the novel could be loglined “Bonnie and Clyde meets Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas, but with teenage girls,” the other main reference point is Doctor Faustus. The climax, in which the characters must decide whether or not to make a very pricy deal with the not-quite-devils, is quite powerful. The ending isn’t the one I expected, but it’s satisfying.

There are some flaws. One of the immortals is Christopher Marlowe. When immortal traveling hedonist Christopher Marlowe is a character, it would be nice if 1) he had more than a cameo role, 2) he made any impression whatsoever. I liked the highly unconventional-for-modern-YA multiple-POVs, which gave the novel a sense of richness and scope lacking in most YA fantasy I’ve read lately, but we probably didn’t need quite as much of Gilly’s Dad’s POV as we got. Sometimes the grittiness felt calculated or over the top. At one point a character is running around and doing stuff with an injury severe enough that they would be more likely to be curled up on the sidewalk until they got taken away by ambulance.

Finally, there is a very important song which the characters view as their personal anthem and often sing. Many song lyrics which sound great when sung sound distinctly less great when read. Even an otherwise powerful song like “Born in the USA” contains the line “I’m a cool rocking Daddy in the USA.” Not to mention “da doo ron ron ron” and “gabba gabba hey.” However… the song lyrics were still distinctly not great.

But overall, I enjoyed the book a lot. All else aside, this reminded me of being sixteen and reading urban fantasies by people like Emma Bull and Charles de Lint, and how exciting it was to see magic in a city. That sort of fantasy is less popular nowadays, replaced by “My vampire/angel/zombie boyfriend” and “I kick vampire/angel/zombie ass” novels, which have different conventions and of which I’m less fond. Tripping to Somewhere is old school in a way that feels new and fresh.

Feel free to put spoilers in comments.

Tripping to Somewhere. Only $5.99 on Kindle, and well worth it.
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From: [personal profile] kore


It sounds interesting but - the mes and the EYE INJURY (oh ghod no) may be dealbreakers for me.

From: [personal profile] tool_of_satan


If you're squicked by eye injuries I wouldn't really recommend it, as the section in question is pretty important, so not easily skipped. I was only mildly squicked by it, but I have become somewhat inured to eye issues for reasons which you would probably prefer I didn't go into. :)
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Eye injuries in movies or TV shows are dealbreakers for me, so yeah, if it's not that skippable....
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....how graphic are we talking? Does eye jelly go squish? Does blood spurt from the socket? Is it like Titus Andronicus or something?

From: [identity profile] tool-of-satan.livejournal.com


I thought it was generally well-done. I don't think I liked it quite as much as you did, but I don't have your memories of reading urban fantasy.

My complaints about the book, more or less in order of seriousness:

1. I thought the opening was a bit rushed. A few pages to introduce us to Gilly and Sam and why they would want to leave would have worked better for me.

2. As you say, the song lyrics.

3. The injury you mention, which I also thought was rather over the top. And likely will squick a number of people (it's a severe eye injury).

4. The Witches' Carnival doesn't seem to DO anything except travel around and throw parties. It strikes me as a poor way to spend immortality, but what do I know? This relates to your point about Marlowe. And, if I understood the very brief bit about one of the other women properly, she's a famous person from Chinese history, and maybe it would have been nice to see her do something. (I am totally unable to recall her name or search for it properly.)

5. It didn't really work for me that (almost) everyone in the book seemed to have heard of the Witches' Carnival. Maybe it's a real legendary thing which I managed to miss up until now, but if it's not, I think the author would have done better to make it something obscure, that only people really into the occult know about. Why this strikes me as different from, say, everyone knowing about a band which doesn't exist in our world is something I am not sure I can explain, but it does.

However, these are mostly quibbles. I enjoyed the book and honestly, my problems with the fantasy elements are not really on-point since the book is focused on other things.

From: [identity profile] rachelmanija.livejournal.com


I was tickled by everyone having heard of the Witches' Carnival. "Oh, of course, the Witches' Carnival!"

I assume Reisz made it up, but I liked that rather than doing the usual urban fantasy thing of having everyone go through the stage of discovery, disbelief, denial, and finally acceptance, it was just this thing that everyone already knew about and thought was at least possible.

From: [identity profile] tool-of-satan.livejournal.com


That makes sense. Had I read more (or any[*]) prior urban fantasy I might have felt the same way.

[*] Thinking about it more, I am not sure I have ever read any, depending on how it's defined. The Last Hot Time doesn't count, I'm sure. Gypsy? Sarah Rees Brennan's Demon books? Not sure.

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Reisz has published another novel since this. However, rather than being old-school urban fantasy, it's about werewolves.
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When immortal traveling hedonist Christopher Marlowe is a character, it would be nice if 1) he had more than a cameo role, 2) he made any impression whatsoever.

I think I am existentially depressed by authors who waste and/or otherwise misuse Christopher Marlowe.

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"If you're not going to use your Elizabethan playwright properly then you can't have an Elizabethan playwright."

Have you read John M. Ford's The Scholars of Night?

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