YA novels really need to stop having their protagonists fail to influence the outcome of the plot in any measurable way. Especially if they have one male and one female protagonist, and by the end only the boy has actually done anything. Especially if the boy goes off to face the Big Bad while the girl stays with a nervous pregnant woman.
Fantasy novels need to stop having their characters moved around by powerful forces like chess pieces, so that, for instance, necessary plot devices like magic books magically appear in their lockers without them actually having to do anything to acquire them, and for the solutions to their problems to just pop into their minds.
All novels which aspire to me not hurling them across the room need to stop having every character including urban teenagers go on about how horrible and soulless cities and the modern world are, and how things were better in olden timeswhen woman had no rights and plague was epidemic.
I do really like Dalton's Night Maze and Out of the Ordinary, but I can see why this one hasn't been picked up in the US.
Fantasy novels need to stop having their characters moved around by powerful forces like chess pieces, so that, for instance, necessary plot devices like magic books magically appear in their lockers without them actually having to do anything to acquire them, and for the solutions to their problems to just pop into their minds.
All novels which aspire to me not hurling them across the room need to stop having every character including urban teenagers go on about how horrible and soulless cities and the modern world are, and how things were better in olden times
I do really like Dalton's Night Maze and Out of the Ordinary, but I can see why this one hasn't been picked up in the US.