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A Watership Down-esque epic fantasy about an ant colony under threat.
I don't expect talking animal books to be totally faithful to actual animal behavior, but I do want them to at least evoke the general concept of the animal in question. Peter Rabbit may wear a blue jacket, but he also sneaks into danger to get carrots. T. H. White's ant colonies are strictly regimented, with dissent literally unthinkable; they're metaphors for fascism, but it feels intuitively correct that ants could sort all things into DONE/NOT DONE.
The closer the animals are to actual animals, the more faithful I expect them to be to actual animal behavior. I expect less rabbit-ness from Peter Rabbit, who wears a blue jacket, than from the Watership Down rabbits, who don't wear clothing and live in burrows. If the animals are clearly intended to more-or-less be real animals, I definitely expect their biology/anatomy to be correct. Even Peter Rabbit shouldn't have an exoskeleton or thumbs.
Hawdon's ants are clearly intended to be real ants, except talking and intelligent. They climb blades of grass. They live in a colony. They are in danger of being stepped on.
1. WORKER ANTS ARE ALL FEMALE, HAWDON. YOU DON'T GET TO MAKE ALL THE ANTS MALE EXCEPT FOR THE QUEEN JUST SO YOU CAN AVOID HAVING MORE THAN ONE FEMALE CHARACTER IN THE ENTIRE BOOK.
2. Ants do not have lungs.
3. Ants do not have skulls.
I don't expect talking animal books to be totally faithful to actual animal behavior, but I do want them to at least evoke the general concept of the animal in question. Peter Rabbit may wear a blue jacket, but he also sneaks into danger to get carrots. T. H. White's ant colonies are strictly regimented, with dissent literally unthinkable; they're metaphors for fascism, but it feels intuitively correct that ants could sort all things into DONE/NOT DONE.
The closer the animals are to actual animals, the more faithful I expect them to be to actual animal behavior. I expect less rabbit-ness from Peter Rabbit, who wears a blue jacket, than from the Watership Down rabbits, who don't wear clothing and live in burrows. If the animals are clearly intended to more-or-less be real animals, I definitely expect their biology/anatomy to be correct. Even Peter Rabbit shouldn't have an exoskeleton or thumbs.
Hawdon's ants are clearly intended to be real ants, except talking and intelligent. They climb blades of grass. They live in a colony. They are in danger of being stepped on.
1. WORKER ANTS ARE ALL FEMALE, HAWDON. YOU DON'T GET TO MAKE ALL THE ANTS MALE EXCEPT FOR THE QUEEN JUST SO YOU CAN AVOID HAVING MORE THAN ONE FEMALE CHARACTER IN THE ENTIRE BOOK.
2. Ants do not have lungs.
3. Ants do not have skulls.
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*Facepalm*
I could put lungs and skull down to poor understanding of anatomy, but female workers is fundamental.
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I should probably be as forgiving as you are, but the insect body plan is just so fundamentally and importantly different from the vertebrate one I want to smack the author with a copy of their own book. It's basic research! augh!
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(Rabbit vampire who, uh, vampirically sucks the life-juices out of VEGGIES.)
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This book made me love parsnips, which were presented to me as vampirized carrots when inevitably I named my small black-and-white stuffed animal rabbit Bunnicula.
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eexplodes in a shower of glitter
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Imagine being female - no!
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But, but, the fact that the worker ants are all female and have exoskeletons are what makes them INTERESTINGLY non-human!!!!
/have written two stories about ants/ant-like aliens, had a great time, but had a great time partially because it's so fun to worldbuild with ants!
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I KNOW.
What were you ant-alien stories?
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Alien giant ants (Book of Esther IN SPACE): https://archiveofourown.org/works/21590281
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(There’s a recent Watership Down graphic novel which both my children are now gratifyingly obsessed with; we’ve also watched the original animated film and listened to about 2/3rds of the Peter Capaldi audiobook while I dig through boxes looking for my actual hard copy)
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This doesn't sound like that.
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Oh for fuck's sake.
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